Comments on: I. Assessment http://www.futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/i-assessment/ Fri, 06 Mar 2009 22:45:31 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: James Warner http://www.futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/i-assessment/#comment-216 James Warner Sun, 07 Jan 2007 18:09:39 +0000 http://futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/?p=5#comment-216 In addition, the decision to omit any references or citations from the text does not enrich the report. Phrases like "pessimism is pervasive," should be backed up by some evidence. Was this the authors' impression? Or is it an assertion based on public opinion polling in Iraq (which does exist), or general anecdotal evidence from the people the authors consulted? In addition, the decision to omit any references or citations from the text does not enrich the report. Phrases like “pessimism is pervasive,” should be backed up by some evidence. Was this the authors’ impression? Or is it an assertion based on public opinion polling in Iraq (which does exist), or general anecdotal evidence from the people the authors consulted?

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By: James Warner http://www.futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/i-assessment/#comment-215 James Warner Sun, 07 Jan 2007 18:00:08 +0000 http://futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/?p=5#comment-215 The use of the passive voice here --"Saddam Hussein has been removed from power"--is peculiar. Besides being a construction that would never pass muster in academia or journalism, the authors' use of the passive voice here speaks to a general aversion throughout the report to a frank acceptance of American responsibility for initating the Iraq War, for its (mis) conduct, and for the consequences which have and will follow. The use of the passive voice here –”Saddam Hussein has been removed from power”–is peculiar. Besides being a construction that would never pass muster in academia or journalism, the authors’ use of the passive voice here speaks to a general aversion throughout the report to a frank acceptance of American responsibility for initating the Iraq War, for its (mis) conduct, and for the consequences which have and will follow.

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By: Curtis White http://www.futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/i-assessment/#comment-192 Curtis White Sun, 31 Dec 2006 17:44:35 +0000 http://futureofthebook.org/iraqreport/?p=5#comment-192 In a more just world, using the phrase "critical to U.S. interests" would be prima facie evidence of "evil intent" and just cause for a session of water boarding at Guantanamo. Just sort of to wash that phrase out once and for all. All it really means is "Western capitalism would like if at all possible to have continued access to cheap oil and if it means a little shock and awe to maintain access to this oil, well, Okay." In a more just world, using the phrase “critical to U.S. interests” would be prima facie evidence of “evil intent” and just cause for a session of water boarding at Guantanamo. Just sort of to wash that phrase out once and for all. All it really means is “Western capitalism would like if at all possible to have continued access to cheap oil and if it means a little shock and awe to maintain access to this oil, well, Okay.”

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